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I'd rather have you cry on my shoulder
than to have to cry on your casket
I want you to take my hand now
and I hope that you never let go
whisper to me all the things you want to
I'll listen to you until I'm dead and gone

cry on me
just let me see
tell me how you feel
let me know you're real
let me put my arms around you
and let you feel something new


don't try to cut away your life
I won't let you use the knife
don't poison your life away
I need you with me everyday
I know there's nothing I can say
but I need you to stay

I want you to cry on my shoulder
I just want her to let me hold her
I won't let you get any colder
I just wish these things I'd told her


please don't go
please stay with me
take my hand
and never let me go
:iconwhatudidntcreate:
I dont care if it rhymes or not. its wasnt meant to. This was written for my ex gf Mariann. if ever u need a shoulder to cry i will be there for u babe. just please take my hand and dont let go. u have so much potential and i know that one day u will make sumthing of urself and then u can throw it back in all those peoples faces that dont care about u and think u wont make it anywhere. just stay here with me.
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*Darvia123 Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful..........
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~WhAtUDiDnTCrEatE Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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Mood: Happy ~Maklos Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Great Song
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~this-is-a-paradox Apr 18, 2012  Student Artist
I like it! I like how it's clear what it's about but you only say so using metaphors/descriptive words and language. Nice job!
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:iconglaciasfrost:
wow this is beyond amaizing and beautiful!i love it soo much!thanks for writing this aha i reread it about idk say 20 or more lol :D LOVE IT!!!!
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~WhAtUDiDnTCrEatE Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol you're welcome and thank you very much! i appreciate it. it still surprises me sometimes when people like my work so much. thank you again <3
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:iconmeghanuchiha36:
I love this poem, its very buitiful, it brought tears to my eyes
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:iconpoetry-is-life-aloud:
beautiful. that doesn't even sum up the emotions conveyed.
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:iconwhatudidntcreate:
~WhAtUDiDnTCrEatE Jan 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you very much. i appreciate it so much.
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:iconnightmare-renter:
simply beautiful.
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